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Money and Feeling
In this era, money is really important thing for us. What will happen if we live without money? Maybe we can not survive in this world. We can stay alive until now because, money is giving us many kind of thing that we need. Can make us still study, and sometimes with money, I can be happy. That’s why money is one of the important things in our live but, not all of the things can you buy with money. Three of the things that you can not buy with money are love, loyalty, and sincerity.
Love is definite feeling that belong to every people. Children, teenager, and adult must have this feel. Can you remember when you are still young, and you will be cryi if your mom leave you? Why you can be like that? Because, you love your mom. You do not want your mom leave you alone. And then, when you are being teenager, and you start to crush on and love someone. Can you buy that with your money? Can you buy your mom’s feeling and someone’s feeling with money? No, you can not buy that. You can not buy love with money. Maybe, you just can buy some stuff and a gift for someone you love but, you can buy their feels. You just can try to make them love you with a good behavior. Real love will come with a real feeling, not with money.
It’s hard to find a good people who are loyal, because loyalty is feeling thay can not you buy. Can you buy this feel with your money? Can you make your girl friend or your boy friend stay with you when they want to break up with your money? No, you can not buy, because loyalty can not be forced. Someone’s who love you, will be loyal if they feeling comfortable when they are in your side. When they are miss you for all the time. If everyone can buy loyalty with their money, maybe I will not hear the word like “Good bye for ever” and maybe I will not see my friend crying because they are break up. If one time everyone can buy loyalty, I will buy it for my boy friend and my friend.
Can you help the other with sincerity? Sometimes it’s hard to be sincere people. And the fact is money can not buy this feel. Sincere is one of feeling that come from the deepest heart. For the example, when you give your food to someone, being sincere it’s hard. Sometimes, it will happen if you still feeling hungry, but it’s not good if you don’t give your food. Just some of the people who will feel sincere. Sincerity, it’s one of feel in human’s heart. All of the people have this feel, but with different level. Some people have a good feel sincere, and the others not good. The reason why we can not buy sincerity is because sincerity come from the deepest heart.
In conclusion, you can not buy others feeling, like love, loyalty, and sincerity with your money. You can not buy that because, feeling come from heart, maybe our deepest heart. Feeling will not be lie. Although now, money is important, but do not forget to remember that all of the things can not you buy with your money. And you must still be good with others people, because their feeling can not you buy.
Amanda Nurul Amalia
Intermediate 4 (Friday 05.00pm-09.00pm)
Money and Feeling
In this era, money is really important thing for us. What will happen if we live without money? Maybe we can not survive in this world. We can stay alive until now because, money is giving us many kind of thing that we need. Can make us still study, and sometimes with money, I can be happy. That’s why money is one of the important things in our live but, not all of the things can you buy with money. Three of the things that you can not buy with money are love, loyalty, and sincerity.
Love is definite feeling that belong to every people. Children, teenager, and adult must have this feel. Can you remember when you are still young, and you will be cryi if your mom leave you? Why you can be like that? Because, you love your mom. You do not want your mom leave you alone. And then, when you are being teenager, and you start to crush on and love someone. Can you buy that with your money? Can you buy your mom’s feeling and someone’s feeling with money? No, you can not buy that. You can not buy love with money. Maybe, you just can buy some stuff and a gift for someone you love but, you can buy their feels. You just can try to make them love you with a good behavior. Real love will come with a real feeling, not with money.
It’s hard to find a good people who are loyal, because loyalty is feeling thay can not you buy. Can you buy this feel with your money? Can you make your girl friend or your boy friend stay with you when they want to break up with your money? No, you can not buy, because loyalty can not be forced. Someone’s who love you, will be loyal if they feeling comfortable when they are in your side. When they are miss you for all the time. If everyone can buy loyalty with their money, maybe I will not hear the word like “Good bye for ever” and maybe I will not see my friend crying because they are break up. If one time everyone can buy loyalty, I will buy it for my boy friend and my friend.
Can you help the other with sincerity? Sometimes it’s hard to be sincere people. And the fact is money can not buy this feel. Sincere is one of feeling that come from the deepest heart. For the example, when you give your food to someone, being sincere it’s hard. Sometimes, it will happen if you still feeling hungry, but it’s not good if you don’t give your food. Just some of the people who will feel sincere. Sincerity, it’s one of feel in human’s heart. All of the people have this feel, but with different level. Some people have a good feel sincere, and the others not good. The reason why we can not buy sincerity is because sincerity come from the deepest heart.
In conclusion, you can not buy others feeling, like love, loyalty, and sincerity with your money. You can not buy that because, feeling come from heart, maybe our deepest heart. Feeling will not be lie. Although now, money is important, but do not forget to remember that all of the things can not you buy with your money. And you must still be good with others people, because their feeling can not you buy.
Amanda Nurul Amalia
Intermediate 4 (Friday 05.00pm-09.00pm)
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